Q&A: Probably tired of seeing this but, would someone take the time to check my story for punctuation mistakes?

by Ken Lund
Question by Echo?: Probably tired of seeing this but, would someone take the time to check my story for punctuation mistakes?
The metropolis of Zion, the capital of the Upper Continent, was known for its seafood and spiritual customs. A couple of miles outside the city stood the temple of Uruen, the water demon. Zion, unlike many of the other major metropolis throughout the continent, was more scientifically advanced and productive. Since the city was a peninsula, it also

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