Proofreading HELP!!!!!!!! Please?

by Alan Stanton
Question by MM: Proofreading HELP!!!!!!!! Please?
Hi,
could you please review my cover letter for grammatical error(Proofreading).
Here is the link if you like to help me



Dear Ms. Denis,

It is with great interest that I am applying for the position of IT Support Student which was advertised through the University Internship office.I would welcome the opportunity to apply my new skills to this position.

In addition to pursuing an Advance Diploma in Computer Engineering

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